cinquain

Thinking (title)
There(NP1)
My thoughts sailed(NP2)
To places undiscovered(prep. phrase)
since the familiar became familiar(sub. clause)

Resolve

Cold (Noun Phrase, 1 Syllable)
Till dawn (Duration, 2 Syllables)
At my core (Prepositional Phrase, 3 Syllables)
Trying to trust (Infinitive Verb Phrase, 4 Syllables)
That morning will come (Subordinate Clause, 5 Syllables).

Sorry this came so late. I couldn't find the piece of homework that I turned it in on. Whoops!
Please critique.

Kyle

Cinquain

Working

(Title)

Diligently (Manner)

Each day of the week (Noun Phrase)

throughout the sun-burnt fields (Prepositional Phrase)

to bring the pennies which pay for bread (Infinitive Verb Phrase)

Even though I know this wheat is turned to flour. (Subordinate Clause)

rock climbing poem

Rock Climbing(title)

Ascending
Beyond the limit
Countless rocky routes
To demand the best of yourself
Excursions taken in the great unknown