Tuesday, May 08, 2007

cinquain

Running
Away
From the stress
I have no time
To stop and relax
Before it all falls apart

1 Comments:

At May 15, 2007 at 4:05 PM, Blogger Aaron said...

Good cinquain. It seems to follow all the requirements. I do wonder if the line "I have no time" is acceptable in the cinquain format, or is it just supposed to be a noun prase by itself?

 

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