Saying GoodbyeSleepilyIn the pre-dawn lightJust one last timeTo kiss your lipsBecause it was our first time
posted by A. Heninger @ 6:52 PM 2 comments
Beautiful... But are the lines supposed to increase in length as the poem moves along?
I love your second line, with the adverbial phrase. I thought it was beautifully creative.
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Beautiful... But are the lines supposed to increase in length as the poem moves along?
I love your second line, with the adverbial phrase. I thought it was beautifully creative.
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