Thursday, May 08, 2008

Cinquain

Saying Goodbye

Sleepily
In the pre-dawn light
Just one last time
To kiss your lips
Because it was our first time

2 Comments:

At May 16, 2008 at 12:20 AM, Blogger Ashley said...

Beautiful... But are the lines supposed to increase in length as the poem moves along?

 
At May 16, 2008 at 12:22 AM, Blogger amykathryn said...

I love your second line, with the adverbial phrase. I thought it was beautifully creative.

 

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