Writing Commons Four: Cinquain

Friday, May 09, 2008

Procrastinating

Perhaps
Tomorrow
It should happen
Things will get done
When I get around to it

At May 15, 2008 at 10:35 PM, A. Heninger said...: It might be a good idea to look at the instructions again, becasue only the first and last lines are the correct structure. the fourth line could be something like, "to get something done", which would be an infinitive phrase. your second line should become the third line, and then you need a prepositional phrase to replace it. something starting with "after" would work well.
At May 16, 2008 at 12:26 AM, Ashley said...: Love the idea! But I agree with the comments about structure, just change a couple words and you'll be good!
At May 16, 2008 at 12:29 AM, amykathryn said...: Just with the few changes someone suggested you make, I think you could make your cinquain even better! I loved your chosen theme, and the way the last line tied everything in together.