Writing Commons Four: Waiting

Thursday, May 08, 2008

Wishing
Now
For someone
One simple smile
To lift my spirits
Becuase you promise new joy

At May 15, 2008 at 10:26 PM, A. Heninger said...: good, but I'm not sure if your noun phrase is adverbial.
At May 16, 2008 at 12:23 AM, Ashley said...: This comment has been removed by the author.
At May 16, 2008 at 12:29 AM, Ashley said...: Beautiful aimes! Just check out the spelling of "because" ;)