Tuesday, May 04, 2010

Cinquain Poem

Kissing

Here
In the street
One thousand kisses
To show that you are mine
Because only the Beatles do it in the road

3 Comments:

At May 5, 2010 at 4:57 PM, Blogger Kimberly said...

Hi! I love your poem! The last line shocked me a little. It's like it came out of nowhere and yet it still works!

 
At May 11, 2010 at 9:27 PM, Blogger Katie said...

Awesome. Though the last line blasts out the syls like there is no tomorrow.

 
At May 12, 2010 at 10:49 AM, Blogger Zachery Smith said...

Fantastic poem! Who doesn't love public displays of affection?

 

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